Well, the nose is in focus . Say after me: "I'll never do onsite proofing again. I'll never do onsite proofing again. I'll never . . . . ."

Don't try to sharpen the eye because it will look unnatural. If this is what they like, then sell it to them. But letting people see your "rejects" is always dangerous. Just grit your teeth and insist that was what you were trying to do .

Jim