Hi Boise, here are my thoughts:

1. I wish you would have had more light and less shadow. It's a bit stark. Next time place your camera where the light is more even over the subject. I wanted you to bring your camera around to the right more, looking straight at that center flower.

2. Where do you want the viewer's eye to land? I wish you would have picked one of the flowers of the bunch and emphasized it.

3. You've chopped out the flowers on the top and left margins.

Hope this helps! :-)