Hi Dean,
Thanks for posting. I think the question that I want to ask is 'what are you trying to say' with the photographs? They are all perfectly exposed (though I think the light is hard on the first image).
The shots that I like most are the ones that have interaction. i.e. the spider climbing the flower and the last image. I think that I might use a clone tool or paint brush with a low opacity to lightly take out the flash marks on some of the images.
James