Gateway to Heaven with barbed wire in my way? Hope it is not that hard to get into. Glad you posted this image. My first reaction was "lack luster". Not sure what you were trying to say with this composition. Your explanation helped.

I did drop it in Photoshop and gave it some more saturation. Gorgeous sky! Maybe my being a horse person and my distain for that damaging wire has tainted my feeling for this image.