I believe the shot is okay. I'll take the critical eye approach. I hope youre looking for constructive comments. If not, ignore me.

If i were to display a shot for marketing purposes, I would want it to be a little more balance and at eye level. animals usually appear better if they are photographed at their level. I would also have not clipped the front paw and likely would have positioned the eye a little farther up and off center of the frame. Finally, if you want that wow factor, you will need to capture an emotion, or a "pose." Your shot lacks the energy that I would want to see in an example of the type of work I shoot. There needs to be more flow, or more energy in a shot that's projecting your talents.

I you choose to use that shot, i'd crop it so that it has more balance so that it's not over weighted on the right side as it now is. . . you could crop it so that the eyes are a little more to the upper left than they now are. . .

good luck,

Tony