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hayfield in the mountains #10938
10/14/07 05:52 PM
10/14/07 05:52 PM
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Randall Offline OP
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I would appreciate and help and c/c on this early morning shot.
Thanks Randall


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Re: hayfield in the mountains [Re: Randall] #10939
10/15/07 04:22 PM
10/15/07 04:22 PM
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The colors are wonderful, and it is a beautiful scene. It may have been helped by using a grad ND filter to better balance the light. The bright areas of the sky seem to have caused the landscape to be a bit underexposed and therefore a bit noisy.
What ISO were you using? I can't find the value in the EXIF data.

I notice what seem to be numerous dust spots on the sensor in the sky (probably in other places, but the rest is too dark for them to be easily seen on the web.)


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Re: hayfield in the mountains [Re: Durwood Edwards] #10940
10/15/07 05:56 PM
10/15/07 05:56 PM
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Randall Offline OP
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Sorry about the dust spots I acidently uploaded the wrong pic. The Iso as I recall was 100.
Thanks Durwood for all the tips maybe I should invest in noise ninja or ?
Thanks Randall


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Re: hayfield in the mountains [Re: Randall] #10941
10/16/07 10:43 AM
10/16/07 10:43 AM
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Arizona
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Randall

I am always hesitant to provide my comments because I have such a long ways to go with my own work, but I also think commenting helps both parties - so here I go.

Composition/use of frame space

I like the way you framed the hay, the sun on the left and the light on the clouds on the right. I think this has a great composition.

Colors/White Balance

Here I am not sure how to comment. In one respect, I think the shot has too much red (or maybe magenta). I see this in both the sky and the field on the right bottom. However, this shot has a lot of emotion that I love, and some of that emotion I think comes from this overall color, so I am not sure what to think.

Exposure

There is a lot of DR in this shot, so this would have been a challenge. The sky seems exposed well, but then there is associated under exposure on the ground. I would like to see more detail in the hay stack on the left - where it is under exposed. This shot probably would benefit from some sort of blending on the exposure - (or ND filter).


Creative use of Aperture/Shutter
Shutter / aperature seems appropriate.

Perspective
Wonderful perspective on a serene location. I really like this shot.

Creativity

This is a very creative shot - the haze in the distance really adds to the overall impact.

Emotion

Beautiful.

Forethought/Visualization

Post processing

The noise does not really bother me - I think in some ways it adds to the emotion. I am sure it is due to the under exposed ground since the exposure seems to have been optimized on the sky.

I really like this shot - thanks for sharing.

Dave


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