What do you think? Am I making any progress on these things?

I think it is too much. Too busy. Less is more.

I agree on that, but the client wanted all the images included.

My first thought was "Ugh, what am I going to do with all those tunnels?!"

Too busy Jim! Keep the A-Frame, you are right, there are a awful amount of tunnels and chutes. Can you add a set of weave poles, diagionally on the bottom left corner heading to the middle of the photo? Keep the blue chute on the right, that is a great photo, and the jump photo. I would think about adding a table on the bottom right corner. I would say 4 images? maybe 5 total. 8 is a little much (counting the A-Frame)

No Table in NADAC plus these are the image the client selected. Now, it's up to me to put them in.

I think in the future, I'll limit the number of images included in each collage.

Live and learn.

OH!
You didn't mention that part. The client want all of those images? Can you shrink some of them? I think the biggest thing I don't like is the central pic. The out of focus fence thingy draws your eye to it. Can you clone out just the dog, than add some grass in? That may help it look less crowded.

I can put grass over the fence easily enough. Maybe shrink the top tunnels a bit.

This one isn't so bad, I have another that I'm completely uninspired about.

Not to get too specific but how do you price these. They are almost getting a photo book in an 8x10.

Probably too low right now.

$45 for 8x10 and $65 for 11x14.

Definitely too low. Especially for all those photos