Hi Dave,
In general I like this shot. The subject matter and the time of day work for me. I like the colors in the sunset and in the grass area in the middle of the foreground area.
The thing that I find distracting are the two plants/bushes/cacti on the right side of the image. They are very high contrast and draw my attention away from the rest of the shot.
I held a piece of paper against the image on screen at about the halfway point blocking the right side in essence making a vertical crop on the cacti on the left and like it better. What do you think?