Since your asking for a critique on the site structure, and not every pictue on the site, I agree that it is an acceptable request.
I think the rules are ment for people who say look at the pictures on my site and give me a critique. Some of the critiques here can get quite in depth and as such you can see why we would limit such a request.
I will try to get to this later this evening. Not a web builder but have no problem telling you as a viewer what works and dosnt for me.
Welcome, and grats on getting out of lurker mode.
Roman