Hey Jim,
You are, of course, correct. My server was blocking it. I did see it with my ipad. At the viewing size, it is hard to tell entirely, however, I think you did a nice job with the eyes. It might be nice to see the files at a larger size, or perhaps a swatch of the 100% crop if you don't want to post at a larger size.
I hear what Preston is saying, but I would probably do a small amount of extra work on this photo. For example, I would still consider cleaning up some of the specular highlights. For example, the light going down the nose, and on the lips. You did a nice job with the light and I don't think it absolutely needs to be done...but it would definitely be on the table.
James