Oh I'm always curious as to what *I* think is right, what the "Technical" says is right(mind you I base my stuff from that) and what OTHER's think is right.
I love the shot, great defination! But yes a bit to harsh colorwise.
I have been looking into various monitor calibration devices and THAT might be part of what is being seen on the original screen?
Here's my stab at it,(I tend to practice better on something I haven't already "seen"(in person) and I'm jealous that this wanderer, already figured out the embeding technique!

PS...How do you like the Canon 30D??