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Here's one from a recent portrait sitting #26484
11/16/09 02:32 PM
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Re: Here's one from a recent portrait sitting [Re: Jim Poor] #26485
11/17/09 07:54 PM
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Hey Jim,

You are breaking rules, you know. You only need to shoot the dog from up high if it is over weight. That is a joke of course.

Honestly, I did look at this image a couple of times before replying (that seems to happen a lot in the Critiques forum). Initially, I found the dog's pose, in combination with your photographing angle, to be a bit disorienting. Having said that, I look at it over and over again and I have decided that I like the pose because it is different. Also, I will admit that I tend to get a bit crazy about shadow elimination when shooting on a white background, but what you are presenting is fine.

Curiously, you are a competent photographer showing off a well lit and composed image - what are you looking for in a critique? And, for the second $64,000 question is - did the image sell?

Cheers,
James

Re: Here's one from a recent portrait sitting [Re: James Morrissey] #26486
11/17/09 08:08 PM
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Thanks James,

I sort of "discovered" this angle by accident although I'm sure it has been done many times before.

It strikes me as a sort of funny greeting card look, yet a bit disorienting in a fun-house sort of way.

I do notice in JPG form that there is some banding in between the light and dark side of the backdrop, but I think I have a cure for that next time around.

What am I looking for in a critique? Good question. Since it was shot in such an unusual (for me anyway) way, I thought I'd see what others had to say about it.

Did it sell? We'll see. I did show it to the owner on the back of the camera and she was all misty-eyed over it, but there are other, stronger images in her proof set.

You can see some others on page 2-3 here: http://jimpoor.net/photocart/index.php?vp=3&do=photocart&viewGallery=5070

Re: Here's one from a recent portrait sitting [Re: Jim Poor] #26487
02/03/10 03:36 PM
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I do not have problem with the shadow on the ground; good the the dogs "equipment" is hidden by the chest. The image is interesting and would be an excellent addition to a set of proofs, I would not want it to be the chosen image to hang over the fireplace.

Re: Here's one from a recent portrait sitting [Re: Visceral Image] #26488
02/03/10 04:32 PM
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Thanks. She's a girl so hiding the "equipment" wasn't such an issue. I agree that I wouldn't put it over the mantle, but mayhaps on the cover of a photo book.

Re: Here's one from a recent portrait sitting [Re: Jim Poor] #26489
02/06/10 03:25 PM
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Great shot! If I were the customer, I'd display this somewhere low so the the effect is complete upon looking down at it. Could be used very creatively in lots of ways. Nice.

Re: Here's one from a recent portrait sitting [Re: Buddy Thomason] #26490
02/21/10 10:46 AM
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It is one I would include in a set of proofs, not one I would enter into a competition. I always leave shadows and reflections on both colored paper and white. It grounds the subject. I do not like the floating in the air look.

It could be made compositionaly stronger by taking a little off the top and adding a little to the left.

Re: Here's one from a recent portrait sitting [Re: Julie] #26491
02/21/10 08:43 PM
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Thanks Julie.


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