Posted By: poochography
Greetings and a Bull Terrier - 07/14/10 08:16 AM
Hi guys
Quick intro, i'm Ian, from Wales in the UK, i have an English Bull Terrier and a staffy! I'm pretty new to dog photography and would love some constructive critisim of my work
Anyways, may i present Lola our English Bull Terrier!
Posted By: StephanieMillner
Re: Greetings and a Bull Terrier - 07/14/10 09:01 AM
Wow, what a beautiful dog! I love bull terriers.
Anyway - for critique. That's a cool angle, and an interesting "industrial" feel of the image - works with a bull terrier (not so much with a maltese!)
The main problem I'm seeing is that the dog is broad-lit. If he had turned his face to the right, the open light on camera-right would have illuminated his face and bring out catch-lights in the far eye. If it were me, I probably would have come up a little bit so I'm eye-level to the dog, but that's a matter of preference, especially in a shot like this.
A few other things... I would guess this was shot at around f5.6 on a kit lens? Try backing off from the dog and using a longer lens with wider aperture - that will produce more bokeh in the background. Also, be a little more conscious of subject placement - for example, that girder (or whatever?) is cutting right through his head. If you moved a step to the right, his head would be in that white background area, clearing him from any distractions (because with a longer lens at a wider aperture those chairs would blur out, too.)
Really nice separation light on the right side of the dog. Overall really good texture and a good pose on the dog too.
I'm not sure if it's my monitor but overall the image looks a little bit low-contrast. Again, that might just be my screen.
By the way, greetings from Europe! (I'm in Rome.)
Posted By: RomanJohnston
Re: Greetings and a Bull Terrier - 07/14/10 01:33 PM
I tink that Stephanie covered most of it. The only thing I can add is I would have used an angle that didnt have the cloths line growing out of his head.
Nice shot!
Roman
Posted By: StephanieMillner
Re: Greetings and a Bull Terrier - 07/15/10 07:10 AM
Easy trick about the lighting. Make a fist and hold it out in front of you (fingers facing in). Whichever direction lights up the knuckles is your direction to point the nose - this will short-light your subject and provide those catch-lights.
Oh now that you've said it... I can see how it's a clothesline. It looked like some architectural piece at first!
Good job.
Posted By: StarrLight
Re: Greetings and a Bull Terrier - 07/24/10 07:14 PM
Well I think the critique has been covered but I'll just say, what a crack up! Love the look on the dog's face. I'm also a big fan of Bullies.
Diana