This boy has a very fast growing cancer. I went to his home rather than have him stressed by travel to the studio. He was so sweet and a joy to be around. I would like to know what you think of the collage and do you approve of lettering on the image?

Lovely images; a very nice collage and the lettering is perfect. Wonderful job.

Jim

Hey Peggy,

I agree with Jim. This is really really nice. I like the lettering. Did you have an alternate to compare to?

Nice work.
James

Hi Peggy, this is nice. There are a couple things I would personally do differently. 1) I would take out one or two of the poses, I think its a tad "crowded" for the space, and 2) I'd not overlay any of the poses over the inside edge of the frame, as in the upper right hand corner, its a bit distracting from the overall composition. JMO.

Diana

Oh... actually, I like the ear on the one pose overlaying the frame, its the blurred upper portion of the background on the other pose that doesn't work for me.

I think I'd move the name/titles down to the bottom. the balance is off with it in the middle

Thanks for the comments all. I have another one that has an image instead of the type. It will be used as a throw 50x60. Type is more difficult to read when woven.

I appreciate the opinions and enjoy reading how someone else would handle the project.

On the first one I like the ear out of frame, but not the upper right image. Lettering looks good to me but might also look good on the frame instead of inside.

Nice images, wonderful tribute.

I agree with Psmith, I think you should leave that extra image in. They are all fantastic, and add the lettering to the framed area where you have the space to work with. Nice job!