James, what are using for light? Looks like a softbox but is it on a hotshoe? I ask that because it looks like it is pretty centered and high'ish. When shooting pets like this where you have white in the chest, I have found an umbrella works better, shooting through and off center either camera left or right and a bit lower. The problem is you end up with a bit of flat lighting with the umbrella but if you also used a hairlight with a grid and light the background it will add lots of depth. Just some thoughts.