Love the shot Dave. The square crop is probably the most limiting part of the peice. There is a lot of dynamics in the shot, but they seem balanced out, and with the square frame being the most static of frames to present a peice with, you have to establish tension. Thats the only peice lacking. The DR of the shot could also use a little work to bring back what the eye saw. The sky is just a bit washed out to what I would expect to see if I was there. Microcontrast would be helped with some curve adjustment.

The composition should be worked out in the field...but the rest can easily be worked after the fact as all the data seems to be there.

All in all very well captured....but needs a little fit and finish work to really make this very nice shot sing.

As always...willing to play a bit with it if your inclined to share the file.

Roman