Hi Julie,
I read, last year, about a photographer who did this in Manhattan. It is a great idea - and honestly, you did a very nice job lighting up the image. It looks a tad stronger on the inside of the frame than the outside of the shot...however, nothing that cannot easily be fixed.
Are these shots done on a table, or are they taking up some furniture that had already been in the unit? Would you be willing to take a photograph of the set-up?
James