Thank you Jim for the detailed critique. The composition was not exactly what I would have chosen given complete freedom. The fence came to a "T" right here and I'm pulling down the other part of it to keep it out of the shot. California is so fenced in :-( and I'm usually pretty uncomfortable crossing fence lines to get shots. The first shot I took here was horizontal and does not include the fence as I shot over it. Then I thought perhaps I could do another and include the fence and use it as part of the compo. With what I had to work with, I'm pretty satisfied. But it is always nice to see how others view it and what I might be able to use on another similar situation where I might have a little more control and freedom. Thanks again.


Jeff Tangen