Oh ok, that's kinda what I thought. Thanks for taking the time. It looks a lot better.
I've decided to find a similar pose in a better image and do an "Orton treatment." I'll send the new image along with the one they decided on with a note telling them that I think I accomplished what we thought we had come up with, but that I wasn't happy with the way the original image turned out once I got it back to the office.
Thanks again,
Jim