James, look like you had some very tough light!
Did you blend that shot? if so, how come the dark parts are so underexposed? I was under the impression that blending in PS means you blend two shots, with different exposures together to get one what that contains a better balance. Each photo in the blend is shot at it's optimun exposure and them "blended" together.
It looks to me like your reflection is right, but I think the dark parts of the photo need to be a lot lighter.
I dont know how to blend, I've only read about it.
I like the composition, but can you lighten it up by blending a different middle ground?