I really like this photo a lot. You did some very nice PP, and the composition is pretty darned good. Colors are accurate and lively. Drama shows well.

If I had any suggestions it would have been giving the tip of the mountain a bit more breathing room. Maybe pull back just a tad on the zoom. It might have given you a bit more of the drama in the sky as well.

Other than that....I would say very good job!

Roman