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Hawaii Tree #11721
11/30/07 11:50 PM
11/30/07 11:50 PM
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daveman Offline OP
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Hey everyone. I would appreciate your comments and criticism on this shot. This was taken from a park in downtown Honolulu a couple of weeks ago. I have struggled with the PP on this, so would appreciate thoughts and suggestions.

Thanks,
Dave


Last edited by daveman; 11/30/07 11:54 PM.

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Re: Hawaii Tree [Re: daveman] #11722
12/01/07 02:52 PM
12/01/07 02:52 PM
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BBatten Offline
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I'll have to comment as I sure don't see anything to criticise on this image. Tack sharp and picture perfect.


BBatten
Re: Hawaii Tree [Re: BBatten] #11723
12/01/07 11:32 PM
12/01/07 11:32 PM
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Excellent work. Good use of frame space, the dynamic range has been very well handled. Colors are awesome. Exposure spot on. If I had one small knit....it would be that I would use Transform/distort to pull down the lower left hand corner to give a sense of level...I am guessing you uses a super wide on this wonderful shot.

Great work!!!

Roman

Re: Hawaii Tree [Re: RomanJohnston] #11724
12/04/07 11:35 AM
12/04/07 11:35 AM
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I agree! Great shot filling the frame well.
It may be me, but I see a slight circular marking in front of the tree - was this shot through glass?

Re: Hawaii Tree [Re: dkirk] #11725
12/04/07 06:40 PM
12/04/07 06:40 PM
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Manhattan, New York, New York
James Morrissey Offline
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Hey Dave,

I really like this image a lot. At first, when I looked at it, I was drawn by the highlights at the tops of the tree. They did not look quite natural to me the first few times I looked at them . The more I have looked though, the more I have gotten used to them though.

The composition otherwise itself is quite impressive - I have never seen a tree like it. The one thing I will suggest is that you clone out the garbage pail.

Over-all, a rather unique shot! Thanks for sharing.

James

PS d kirk, I think that the spiral marking you are seeing is a water mark...yes, Dave?

Re: Hawaii Tree [Re: James Morrissey] #11726
12/05/07 01:21 AM
12/05/07 01:21 AM
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Arizona
daveman Offline OP
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Thanks for the comments everyone. The highlights on the trees are what attracted me to this picture and also what I struggled with in the PP.

I think I will distort it to get it to be level and I might see if I can remove the trash can acceptably; thanks for the suggestions Roman and James.

Kirk - the swirl marks are from a watermark.

Thanks again for the comments and suggestions.
Dave


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